INT. HOSPITAL - FLASHBACK
HOLLERBACK FAMILY gathers around the recent birth of a MOTHER who holds her BABY BOY in a small, sterile room.
STEVEN (V.O.)
This is me. Steven Elam Hollerback is what they decided on, after my dad insisted my name have a western flare.
A MAN cries standing over the baby.
STEVEN (CONT’D)
That’s my dad, Ronnie. All of his hopes and expectations wrapped up into one little bundle.
INT. HOSPITAL - FLASHBACK
FAMILY gathers around the birth of a BABY GIRL crying in a traditional hospital room setting. GRANDMOTHER holds and comforts the baby, wrapped tightly in a pink blanket.
KATIE (V.O.)
This is me, Katie Bloom. Born to fly.
Grandmother drops the baby.
KATIE (CONT’D)
OK... maybe not fly. But Survive. I was definitely born to survive.
TITLE: PART 1: SURVIVAL
EXT. - DOWNTOWN BORNE - DAY
The Texas town is quaint, and still. The ground is dehydrated beneath the handsomely restored historic homes and buildings that combine old-fashioned charm and soft colors.
INT. DANCE STUDIO - DAY
The silhouette of a female DANCER practices ballet. An INSTRUCTOR corrects the dancer’s movements.
INT. HOLLERBACH FUNERAL HOME - DAY
STEVEN HOLLERBACH (25) tall, lanky, disheveled hair, and boyish good looks, quietly eats the last bite of a TV dinner. He wears black slacks and a short sleeved plaid shirt.
He waters his dying tree, then walks over to a DEAD BODY on a table, pulls out his makeup kit and applies powder. He tells the cadaver a joke.
photos by Gabri
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Showing posts with label Born Good excerpt. Show all posts
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Wednesday, December 28, 2011
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Born Good (excerpt)
Today, I'm working on our Born Good story that we're filming this fall. When I write, I like to take the title or dialog I've come up with, regarding theme, and use them as 'pushers', so to speak. They push me to stay in the same direction, and not lose focus on what it is I'm trying to say with my characters. The theme can do this for us, too.
Here's an excerpt from our Born Good script, that's helping me achieve this. In addition, I found one from Anne Franke that works for our story, too, so I've posted it below.
Wherever the inspiration is - grab it, and hold on to it until others feel it, too. Happy writing!
"I guess the thing about life is that we’re
all born good… but we never really know
how great we can be… how much we can care…
until we have a reason to."
by Jentri Chancey
"Everyone has inside of him a piece of good news.
The good news is that you really don't know
How great you can be.
How much you can love
What you can accomplish
What your potential is"
-Anne Frank
Here's an excerpt from our Born Good script, that's helping me achieve this. In addition, I found one from Anne Franke that works for our story, too, so I've posted it below.
Wherever the inspiration is - grab it, and hold on to it until others feel it, too. Happy writing!
"I guess the thing about life is that we’re
all born good… but we never really know
how great we can be… how much we can care…
until we have a reason to."
by Jentri Chancey
"Everyone has inside of him a piece of good news.
The good news is that you really don't know
How great you can be.
How much you can love
What you can accomplish
What your potential is"
-Anne Frank
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